wide your stance a liitle bit, release the club after impact in order to get more distance it looks pretty good.

looks very nice, good to start early and get your swing right.

http://newsimg.bbc.co.uk/media/images/40820000/gif/_40820242_slice_main_416.gif

Look at the picture. A slice is when your club comes from outside to inside putting spin heading out. Fix your swing path.

i´m from germany i can´t understand everything, sry... have I to do a shorter follow trough to fix my slice?

very nice swing, the only thing I see is that your follow through is very long and extended when you finish with your hand wrapped around your head.